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fishuu, 04 May 2009 08:45 pm
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Yes, this page is pretty ridiculous. (Also, "floating" is probably not the right word given that she's lowering herself into the couch BUT I'm sure that doesn't matter in the long run.)
Semi-important --> Anyway, after much deliberating, I've decided that I'm going to rewrite and redraw Chapter 1 of this comic. "Oh no, not you too!" Yeah, well. It's not so much the bad art that I can't stand as it is the terrible, terrible writing. Every time I happen to glance through it, I go and beg Terry Pratchett's forgiveness, because honestly, WHAT WAS I THINKING?
I'll begin redrawing as soon as summer vacation starts for me, but I won't post any of it until it's all complete. And er, hopefully by then, DFtR will have its own website? In the meantime, I'll continue to update (slowly, as per usual) chapter 2, so no need to worry about that.
Thanks for reading, as always! :)
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fishuu, 06 May 2009 10:23 pm
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shabalbaiggy: Should be fun!
K-cho: Ffft, Alma cannot escape D:
Avi den Kanashimi: It really is :(
Nashira: IT LOOKS ENTERTAINING, RIGHT? Thank you, I'll do my best :)
ColonelStudmuffin: Haha, hooray! I'm glad you like it :)
Lacana: Aww, thanks. And ... oh dear. I really was going to make one, but then I thought "well I'm getting a site for it eventually so ..." Yes. That's my story XD
TCF: Indeed!
Nanex: They should definitely watch it without her :D
H0lyhandgrenade: I WAS ACTUALLY THINKING OF ALMA DOING THAT WHILE DRAWING THIS XD That is definitely true, but .... arggh. I dunno, I can't let it go! Dx
contego: I can totally see him thinking that XD
Akina-SA: She's off to a good start! ... kinda
amiko_16: Too late! We'll see what happens next 8DD (Oh ummm uhh I'll ... get back to you on that one fft)
Idene: Floating would be amazing... XD
CatzCradle: I appreciate the reassurance :)
Arkadian Mouse: Oh, I'm glad, haha
GreenNin93: Thank you!
akari_mizunashi: Oh man thanks, I love drawing hands XD
MrBallsnSuch: Indeed :<
WhitexNoise: She really did.
miikkie: Thanks!
keoko-dono: IT ETTED HER D:
Gracie-May: Haha, yay! I'm glad you support my idea XD
kittykiity: Just not satisfied with it :)
PEPPERGUM: Aww, why thank you!
sakuya: Haha, at least it's all over
siskhi: Glad it amused you XD
DJPN: Thanks!
Kysun: She'll be back, no worries :P
Obsidian_Angel: She won't be so eager to sit down again, haha
Kamahi: Oh noes :(
tahulover96: Thanks!
2ndgateway: HE IS but I'm not sure he would, or even if I would XD (go go go!)
Syas: Thank you!
Tteok: Haha, I suppose so XD
Kaitousblackwings: Thank you! :)
digitkame: Yeah, faulty wording! XD I'm glad you like it~
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shabalbaiggy, 04 May 2009 08:45 pm
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HAHA FUNNEH
I wanna sink through a couch...
Ooh look! First comment!
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K-cho, 04 May 2009 09:01 pm
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Throughout the page I kept thinking "The couch is EATING HER! Run Alma, RRRRUNNNN!!!!" D:
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Avi den Kanashimi, 04 May 2009 09:40 pm
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Couch = Om Noming Alma~
Fun~
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Nashira, 04 May 2009 09:45 pm
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LOL I want to go sink through my couch now! IT LOOKS FUN BECAUSE SHE HATES IT. :D
Whoo~ restarts take so much effort. D: I WISH YOU LUCK
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ColonelStudmuffin (Guest), 04 May 2009 10:07 pm
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I found this comic a whole three days ago and just now got up to this page, two hours after your post.
SWEET.
love the bold color scheme and unique art. I would be sick of the color green by now if I did that. o_O but it makes for pleasant viewing~
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Lacana, 04 May 2009 10:26 pm
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lol
We all wish we could sink through our couch.
I think your 1st chapter writing is perfectly fine O:
I just reread it :P
and didn't you say you were going to make a new banner? :/ just saying xD
Yep, i have just about that much spare time
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TCF, 04 May 2009 11:22 pm
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Wooh. Couch sinking!
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Nanex, 04 May 2009 11:56 pm
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I'm pretty sure Morte is smiling :P I know I am. They should watch the Pride and Prejudice DVD now :D
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H0lyhandgrenade, 05 May 2009 03:05 am
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Lol oops XD WHAT WILL YOU DO NOW LEWIS WHEN SHE FLOATS THROUGH THE CENTRE OF THE EARTH?
Edit: Oh no, not you too!!! Gragh... another accursed rewrite... Pratchett would forgive you! We must just continue to improve and don't look back at our failures... except to gloat at your past self about how much better you are now.
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contego, 05 May 2009 04:29 am
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death: "shes gone.... this is the best idea uve ever had EVER!"
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Akina-SA, 05 May 2009 09:33 am
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oh dear, floating isn't going very well lol
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amiko_16, 05 May 2009 11:49 am
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Oh shiiit someone better grab her before she completely loses her shit ahaha
Unless all she's gonna do is end up sitting on the floor "inside" the couch XD;
O yah, where were you thinking of getting your domain name from?
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Idene, 05 May 2009 12:51 pm
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i've had this one fantastic dream twice that i absolutely LOVE.
I jump HIGH into the air, and slowly float down by flapping my arms.
hmm, I'LL TRY IT IN REAL LIFE! *climbs step stool, jumps off, doesn't float*
................. plan b. ow. XD
man, to be able to float... that would be awesome.
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CatzCradle, 05 May 2009 02:23 pm
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Awwww... I think your writing is just fine so I don't really think there's a real need to rewrite everything. ^_^
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Arkadian Mouse, 05 May 2009 02:28 pm
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Who knew couches could be so dangerous for ghosts...
I should have slept on the couch more often when I was going through that 'ghosts are real and scary' phase.
Because I'm totally over it now.
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GreenNin93, 05 May 2009 07:21 pm
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Nice
Really awsome comic and I love the scene, heh, good one XD
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akari_mizunashi, 05 May 2009 08:18 pm
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You know what?
You draw hands way too well.
Also you're disturbingly good at portraying ethereal goo.
Just saying. *sinks*
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MrBallsnSuch (Guest), 05 May 2009 08:20 pm
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Yay!
That girl is hot. Ghost girls are hot. W00t. Whats kira doing playing the ds? Youve seen the vore too.
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WhitexNoise, 06 May 2009 06:02 pm
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Good Job Lewis.
She sank into a puddle of couch.
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miikkie, 06 May 2009 06:37 pm
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LMAO! dude i love your comic! absolutly amazing
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keoko-dono, 06 May 2009 08:30 pm
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GAAAAAH I KNEW IT THERE IS A MONSTER IN THE COUCH! D:
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Gracie-May, 06 May 2009 08:56 pm
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keoko-dono is right about the monster in the couch XD and I agree about redrawing the 1st chapter. because your newer stuff is much much better ;]
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kittykiity (Guest), 07 May 2009 09:17 am
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well...the tradition is the first chapter isn't as nice as the others...I didn't think it was bad.
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PEPPERGUM, 07 May 2009 03:53 pm
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OMNOMNOMNOMNOMNOM--But wait a second. She's not floating, shes sinking!!!!
This is a full of win comic that has my seal of approval stamped in big skiny purple embossed letters and a little bit of calligraphy around the whole thing. (y)
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sakuya, 07 May 2009 10:35 pm
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cannot believe i didn't have a chance to read it till now cuz of ap art....D: T^T
i felt like alma until to day. my art I'M SINKING I'M SINKING!!! but now i'm floating lawl
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siskhi, 08 May 2009 05:37 am
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hahahhahahahahahahah xD
hahahahahahahaahah > w <
hahahahahhahaahhahaha >:3
ahahhahahahahahahhaha XDDDDDD!
Holy fuck i am sinking xD
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DJPN, 09 May 2009 10:07 am
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Awesome comic! I'm lovin' this !!
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Kysun, 10 May 2009 04:03 am
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SIIINKIIIIING
HONOES!
SHE'S FUCKING SINKING!
/shot
In other news, the wicket witch of the west is dead!
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Obsidian_Angel, 10 May 2009 06:45 pm
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Alma won't look at a couch the same again after this lol ^_^
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Kamahi, 12 May 2009 02:27 pm
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I've had dreams like this C:
but then I die. :C
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tahulover96, 13 May 2009 06:30 pm
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th8is is an awsoem comic
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2ndgateway, 15 May 2009 09:14 pm
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PRATCHETT IS AMAZING he would forgive you
(oh god the Discworld series is so long I'm never going to finish it)
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Syas, 19 May 2009 05:02 pm
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Hehe, this series is awesome. <3333 I love the art. And the characters. And the plot in general.
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Tteok, 22 May 2009 08:49 pm
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Oh my. :D I guess she's still in the habit of thinking about gravity?
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Kaitousblackwings, 26 May 2009 07:51 pm
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New reader. LOL This is great!!! I really like it so far, I can't wait to see what comes next. :)
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digitkame, 29 May 2009 09:27 am
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Hahaha. Instead of floating, she's doing quite the opposite^^ I love this comic.
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Meganekko-San, 01 Jul 2009 01:09 am
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BLURB
ROFL Heh.She's grabbing what she can no longer reach. I know it's distressing for her, but I can't help but laugh! xD
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